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January 26, 2022 雅思作文真題直擊 | | 欄目推送說明  每場雅思考試之后，第一時間分享本場考試雅思A類大作文的范文權威解析。歡迎每周鎖定。 本期作者：朱玲嬌 2022年1月22日雅思大作文題目 In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government has the responsibility to change the situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?   高分范文及解析 Introduction A conundrum besetting young children nowadays is the declining level of their health, such as corpulence. Some people claim that authorities should be responsible for resolving this problem. Overall, I tend to agree with this view. 解析 過去一年出了很多跟健康飲食生活相關的話題，這次也不例外。這次的群體落在“children”的肥胖問題上。總體來講，政府要負一定的責任。相關話題：Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens eat a healthy diet. Others believe that individuals must take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. ? conundrum n. 問題 ? beset vt. 困擾 ? corpulence n. 臃腫；肥胖 Body 1 There are many fundamental reasons why the government will be better off taking such responsibility. To illustrate, as children will be the main body of future workforce, such health issues are largely likely to incur severe repercussions at the social level, such as a shortage of labour force or a heavier financial burden of healthcare on the authority. In this case, a smart state should take certain precautions to prevent the above consequences by stepping in and utilising its administrative power. Body 2 To cope with this issue, certain policies can be introduced to restrict the production of unhealthy food and to forbid relevant advertising targeting at children. In other words, exposed to mountains of junk food and related advertising, children, who are not mature enough to distinguish the detriments of over-consumption of those foods, usually fail to either resist the temptation or realise that certain features and functions of the products advertised have been greatly exaggerated. Then, it is imperative for the government to protect those vulnerable children by issuing the policies or even enacting the law. Besides, it is due to the surging study pressure that young students have developed a sedentary lifestyle. At this point, the government can also force schools to organise more outdoor activities on a regular basis for the purpose of strengthening students’ physique. 解析 孩子不健康會在社會層面造成不良后果，比如未來勞動力的缺失和醫(yī)療財政負擔，那么政府有責任避免這種情況發(fā)生。再分析孩子過度肥胖的原因是什么：1. 不健康食品及其廣告的引誘 → 政府頒布政策解決；2. 學習壓力大，孩子養(yǎng)成久坐的生活習慣 → 政府要求學校增設戶外活動課 ? be better off 最好（做某事） ? incur vt. 招致 ? repercussions n. （尤指不好的）持續(xù)影響，反響，后果 ? precaution n. 措施 ? expose vt. 暴露 ? resist the temptation 抵制誘惑 ? exaggerate vt. 夸大 ? imperative adj. 迫切的 ? vulnerable adj. 易受到傷害的 ? issue vt. 發(fā)表（聲明）; 頒布，發(fā)出（命令、警告等） ? enact vt. 將…制定成法律 ? physique n. （人的）體格 Body 3 However, that is not to say that such responsibility should be assumed by the government only. More accurately, parents or guardians should also make joint efforts, since government can only put a cap on children’s diet and lifestyle to a limited extent. In contrast, parents usually accompany their children, and thus it is more convenient for them to supervise and restrain their offspring from consuming too many fatty and sugary foods or collapsing in front of the television all day. In this sense, parents should also be involved to help children alter unhealthy lifestyles. 解析 但這并不是說這個問題的責任全在政府。家長作為監(jiān)護人，也有責任去監(jiān)督。、 ? assume vt. 承擔 ? guardian n. 監(jiān)護人 ? joint adj. 聯(lián)合的 ? put a cap on v. 限制 Conclusion In light of the above, the government should be responsible for bettering children’s health, and meanwhile parents should also get involved. 解析 重申觀點  《瑞克和莫蒂》1-5季全集資源 豆瓣評分9.9，好評不斷。 熱愛追劇的少年，不能錯過的動畫神作！ 【新航道3分鐘學雅思】公眾號 |
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